Monday, January 4, 2010

just shooting around

love and space
clandestinely arranged
in my palm.

feeling the weight
of oceans
unfolding

holding
a ball,
sluiced,

by thin black channels

breathing,
from the shoulders out

moving

in signature time
to the dribbling
of felt tip fingers

staining,
the air,
with stanzas.

stopping.
shoulder-width
and stationed still

quarter note gets the beat

leaving
the mundane business
of earth

for heights untethered

while hoping
--just once--
for cursive elegance

back-spun and end-to-end visiting
treasure trove in diameter
the ball
Now
out of my hands...

nylon cross-hatch
hung and hanging
from a thin metal lip

chiaroscuro circumscription
of space
all caroming down.

4 comments:

  1. This has to be the most romantic way I have ever heard the game of basketball described. Aaron you really need to start working on some chick using this stuff. Any woman would be putty in your hands. Here's a toast to your great talent in the writing field. *HUGS* ~AnnA :-)

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  3. I think this is one of your best. I love it.

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  4. Thank you so much Dad. I was so excited when this finally started to come together, as I had been some time in waiting for what I felt to be the right words. The first stanza was with me for three or so years, with occasional ideas occurring to me in the interim before it finally started gain some assemblage and organization in my mind.

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